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Chapter 13

Sewing While Waiting

Fifteen days after Mariam and Tunu left Mto Mdogo, Mariam’s tailoring stall looked like two rooms that had been forced to share one body.

On one side sat the sewing machine, bundles of school uniforms, folded fabric, a tin of buttons, and the small iron that hissed whenever Kesi pressed a collar. On the other side was the folder marked BM-AUD-118, copies of receipts, consent sheets, and the comparison pages Mariam no longer wanted sitting at the center of every working hour.

That morning customers arrived before she had fully unzipped the stall.

A woman carrying three children’s uniforms stopped in the doorway with her mouth already tight.

“I brought these on Monday. Today is Thursday.”

“I know,” Mariam said. “Two skirts are ready. The shirt still needs the sleeve finished.”

“My daughter has assembly tomorrow.”

Mariam did not reach for the housing office, the bedsitter, the audit queue, or the school route as excuses. She took out the two skirts, checked the seams, and laid them over the counter.

“You will have the shirt at four. If you come at four and it is not ready, I will return the labor charge.”

The customer frowned. “I do not want a refund. I want the uniform.”

“That is what I want too.”

When she left, Kesi looked over from the ironing board.

“Mother Tunu, if you personally promise every pickup time, you will never finish anything.”

“What do you suggest?”

“Stop making people come just to ask whether their clothes are ready. Give every order a number. Give every pickup a time.”

Mariam opened the order book. Every job already had a name, phone number, date, and price. What it did not have was a system that someone other than Mariam could follow. When life had been normal, her memory had carried half the business. Now her memory was being asked to hold Tunu’s school route, the bedsitter rent, the housing audit, a SACCO installment, customer deadlines, and the location of every unfinished skirt.

Tunu came by before afternoon tuition, still in uniform, backpack hanging from one shoulder.

“Mama, you said you would give me money for photocopies.”

Mariam opened the cash tin, handed her the money, then held up the order book.

“I need ten minutes of your brain.”

Tunu narrowed her eyes. “Housing?”

“Work.”

That changed her expression.

“Kesi says we need a pickup system.”

Tunu took out her phone. “WhatsApp?”

“For people who use it. What about everyone else?”

“SMS. Same format. Order number, status, pickup time.”

Kesi added, “And the bags need numbers too. Not only names.”

They found a black marker and cut paper tags from an old carton.

U-031. U-032. U-033.

Each bag received a number matching the book. Tunu typed a template into Mariam’s phone:

ORDER U-031: READY. PICKUP: 4:00–5:00 PM. BALANCE: 8,000.

Mariam read it twice.

“Do not put ‘sorry for the delay’ on every message.”

“Why not?”

“Because not every order is late.”

Tunu laughed. “Even your apologies need an audit now.”

Mariam opened her mouth to scold her, then laughed too.

Kesi took over ironing, folding, and the finished-order rack. Mariam kept fittings, alterations that needed judgment, and anything involving expensive fabric. They agreed Kesi would earn extra on heavy pickup days. It reduced Mariam’s margin, but that was the first business calculation in two weeks that felt healthy: a controlled cost was better than free chaos.

At four, the first customer collected her uniforms without asking three times whether they were ready. At four-thirty, a man arrived with his message displayed on his phone and two pairs of trousers over one arm.

“This new system is good,” he said. “Before, I came only to see whether you were here.”

“Now even if I am not, Kesi can tell where your order is.”

“You will be away because of the housing case?”

“Sometimes.”

“Still not finished?”

“Still not finished.”

She did not turn the fitting into a story. She measured his waist, pinned the fabric, and wrote U-039 on a tag.

By midday, heat collected beneath the metal roof until the stall felt like a pot. The air smelled of steam, cotton, market dust, and the faint metallic scent of the iron. Kesi left a bottle of water on the thread box. Tunu headed to tuition after making sure the message templates were saved in Mariam’s phone.

At the doorway she pointed at the screen.

“If an unknown number messages you, do not assume it is housing every time.”

“I am already past that stage.”

“Liar.”

“Go to tuition.”

Late in the afternoon, a long-time customer named Amina came in carrying an office dress that needed the sleeves shortened. She was nearly fifty and always arrived with measurements she had taken herself, though Mariam never trusted them enough to skip measuring again.

“You look tired,” Amina said as she stepped onto the fitting platform.

“It is the market.”

“And the house?”

“And the house.”

Mariam folded one sleeve, marked it with chalk, and measured from the shoulder.

“I heard you have a case number now.”

“I have a case number. I still do not have a house.”

“My sister knows someone in records.”

Mariam kept her eyes on the sleeve. “Which records?”

“Housing. She could ask where your file is.”

Mariam stopped the tape measure.

“Ask what?”

“Just see where it has reached. It is not a crime. People help each other.”

Kesi, working behind them, became very quiet.

Mariam felt the temptation immediately. Fifteen days of sleeping in borrowed spaces. Tunu’s warning slip. Beno’s expensive quotation. BM-17. P-0417. Every one of those things made the phrase she could ask sound like a door.

But a door opened outside the record was exactly the kind of door Mariam no longer trusted.

“Amina, I do not want anyone entering my file outside the case route.”

“I did not say she would enter it wrongly.”

“I know you mean to help.”

“Then?”

“I need a working process, not someone to slip me through.”

Amina lowered her arms. “Now you are afraid even of help.”

“I am afraid of help I cannot explain tomorrow.”

Amina looked at Mariam in the mirror. “And what if this person is actually the auditor assigned to you?”

“Then that is different. If she is officially assigned to my case, I will speak to her officially.”

“And if she is not?”

“Then she should not touch it.”

Amina shook her head, not quite agreeing but understanding the decision had already been made.

They finished the fitting. Mariam wrote a pickup time and handed her the order tag.

At the doorway Amina turned back.

“The person I mentioned is not exactly some backdoor records clerk. She works in internal review.”

Mariam looked up.

“Name?”

Amina opened her handbag. “Nuru. Nuru Adili. I studied with her sister years ago.”

Kesi glanced at Mariam.

“Do not call her about me,” Mariam said.

“I have not.”

“And do not give her my number as a favor.”

Amina laughed. “All right, Mama Audit.”

After she left, Mariam returned to the machine. For the next hour, the business refused to give her time to think about Nuru. U-033 needed a collar corrected. U-035 arrived early. Kesi accidentally placed one bag on the READY rack instead of WAITING FOR FITTING, so they changed the system and added colored clips.

Every small mistake produced a rule that made the next day easier.

An hour before closing, Mariam counted the order book. Eleven jobs completed. No refunds. Kesi had earned the extra pay they had agreed on. The cash tin was not full, but it looked better than it had three days earlier.

Tunu returned from tuition hungry.

“Did our system work?”

“It reduced the number of people asking me ‘is it ready?’ twenty times.”

“Then I deserve consultancy fees.”

“You get food.”

“Unfair.”

Mariam gave her two maandazi she had saved.

While closing, Mariam noticed a small white card trapped beneath Amina’s receipt. At first she thought it belonged to Amina’s company. She picked it up to place it in the lost-property envelope.

The name was the one Amina had mentioned.

There was no private phone number scribbled in pen. No note saying call this person. No promise. Just an official card with an office title.

Mariam placed it on the table without photographing it.

Tunu leaned over.

“Is that the records person?”

“Internal review.”

“Will you call her?”

Mariam closed the cash tin.

“If my case has been assigned to her, they will call me.”

“And if it has not?”

“Then the card does not change the route.”

Tunu spun one of the pickup tags around her finger.

“You can be very difficult.”

“That is why we built a system today.”

Kesi switched off the iron. For the first time since morning, the stall became quiet.

A customer leaves behind a business card: “Nuru Adili — Internal Review Office.”

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